wow...well done.
I like this style of flash... its refreshing and thank god its not another "kill flash." Anyways, the art style was reminescent of the original "crow" Artwork which I love. The atmosphere was just right... plot was bizzare but liveable. Some misspellings in there were detracting your work...but I'm not going to dock it unless its atrocious, which it wasn't. anyways keep up the good work!
Peace