Great improvement
This is a great improvement in depth and style from the original submission of this flash. The movie was cleaned up very well. Unlike this author’s first preview of it, this is one displayed more feeling in the characters.
I sense potential and believe that this author will go far. The style and art is still very rough, but I can see that with more practice he will be one of the better authors out here on Newgrounds.
I can’t wait to see future works and improvement from this author.