No no no!
You don't make part of an average animation and then say that you'll complete it if it gets a high score! You make the WHOLE THING and hope for a high score! I gave you a 1 because you begged for a high score.
No no no!
You don't make part of an average animation and then say that you'll complete it if it gets a high score! You make the WHOLE THING and hope for a high score! I gave you a 1 because you begged for a high score.
twat
too fast
I liked this, looking forward for the other 6 reasons.
But you should show some scenes longer. For example when that teacher gets hit by the paper, you can't really see how ugly he is. Or #4 where this longer text appears, it goes off too soon if your non-native reader.
Other than that, really good. The drawings were nice.
A note to anyone who makes a flash
Please MAKE A FULL VERSION FOR SUBMISSION! This will still probably suck when (if) you add the rest. Please make a full submission so we don't have to grade part of it or the whole thing will be regarded as crap.
Not bad.
It was a pretty good idea. Here are a few things you need to improve on:
1. The sounds are a bit annoying. Work on a little bit more variation than the laugh each time.
2. The graphics were a little lacking. Just try to make everything a bit neater.
3. Finish it.