U should not have called it 10 things to annoy...
usualy people finish things before they submit them, and they usually put in some humor. this could have been something good if you made your characters a little better and actually got something funny. whats up whit that writing in yellow thing?
Ummm...
I suggest you finish it before submitting it.
Poor
Infantile humor, you need to develop your ideas to make it more.....well...funny. To be fair it lacked any kinda humor that anyone would find funny unless they were severly mentally damaged. Improve your humor, and stop submittin' unfinshed work and calling it a trailer. Thats just lazy and incompetent. People should never again repose any hope in your work because it will always ineluctably be sub-par.
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Lame
The only good part was the credits. I see what your point is but its just not funny. better animation would be apriciated