Reviews for StarWarsAFP: Part 1 Act 1

[Dum-Noob]

STAR WARS ROCKS

Cool Flash

My Movies..George Lucas

[death-soul10]

lol

good humor but the graphics could be better try n improve on it k
n maybe the voices could be little louder or put more feeling into it
n the fight scene couldive been better but overall i say this was a
GREAT!

silentmike86 responds:

Thanks you

after all the comments I got about the graphics and sound I set out to make part 2 a hell of allot better, so far so good, there are divinity a lot of improvements. I just watched this again recently (part 1 act 1) and notice how still the characters are compared to part 2.

Thanks for the review; it is cool to get reviews again :)

[newgroundsfreak1]

Meh.

pretty crappy, i have seen better, you could have done better, not funny.

silentmike86 responds:

Sorry you didn't like it, can't please everyone.

Saying that you may enjoy act 2 better, I have been told by many that the jokes are funnier and the animation is slightly improved. Or you may enjoy Part 2 that I am making now, with its greatly improved animation

you must keep in mind that this is and introduction story, that introduces all the characters, it is my least favourite part and was hard to write to get every body in it, part 2 will have more story as will the following parts.

However the humour may still not be to your taste and I respect that, everyone laughs at different things

[Royalknight]

LOL

THAT WAS FUNNY, MAKE MORE

silentmike86 responds:

Thanks

Part 2 is under way, might be done by end of summer

[patrick-oneill]

your funny mate I'll give u that

your funny, and thats not easy for me to say. U just improve on the drawings and you'll be on easy streak

silentmike86 responds:

Thanks

I’ve recently been watching allot of simpsons and family guy and have noticed suttle little things in the animation that I am trying to do in star wars to give it a sharper look, of course I’m still learning so the quality wont be as good as the stuff you see on TV, but you will defiantly notice loads of nice improvement in part 2 (which I am currently animating).

Thanks for the review :)