Yeah!
This is sooo funny. I loved to see the emporer with alzheimers. LOL.
Reviews for "StarWarsAFP: Part 1 Act 1"
Haha! I can explain my score perfectly here.
First of all, I enjoy the choppiness in this movie! I think it adds to the sense of silly parody, considering Star Wars itself is so damn slick and overproduced. The little movements made when the characters talking such as their heads bobbing about really add to the humour in a subtle way. So keep those.
Keep the animation the way it is, but I'd suggest improving some of the drawings. I'm sure that'll come with time.
The only beef I have with this movie is the voice acting. I am sorry, but it is horrible and does actually ruin the movie for me.
Get this: When I have the speakers turned off and I watch the movie with just the subtitles I find this movie hilarious (especially the card scene between Fett and Vader). My friend and I really pissed ourselves at that scene in university, but when I came home to watch it again with sound I found that the voice-acting just killed anything funny being said. I mean, listen to Obi 1 at the start of the movie. He's meant to be shouting but it doesn't sound like it. It just sounds like a small boy pretending to shout. I know its awkward when you try to pull off convincing voice acting when there's other people around but its well worth trying harder. Please keep that in consideration.
Ignoring the sound the humour was pretty spot on! Personally I didn't enjoy 2 as much because it was much more of a direct dig at George Lucas rather than a subtle pisstake. Throwing Vader into that card situation still has me giggling thinking about it.
Keep up the good work :). I'm hoping to release the long awaited Stick Wars Episode III (started last May as soon as I saw SW3) so please keep an eye out. I'd like to hear your feedback also.
-Dave (Fatmandoo)
silentmike86 responds:
Cool great to get a review from a fellow author
Yeah these were the old days where I didn't really know what I was doing, probably good advice to mute it so you don't have to here the bad acting or the awful sound quality.
I actually upped my style a little now, not sure if you've gotten a chance to see TF 2 (my latest cartoon) which has a slightly improved animation, but I’m now trying to animate to TV standard. No more of those striate flip heads when they turn, soon you will see them turn as if they were 3D...sort of...well not really 3D but you know what I mean.
For what little I have animated of part 2 the heads still bop around hehe, but there is also a little cartoon expression where the shape of Boba and Vader’s eye's change shape to indicate more emotion. But overall the style hasn't changed much.
Anyway thanks for the feedback, can’t wait to see Stick Wars Episode III :)
Thanks
Mike
LOVED IT
This is funny, i love it so much
silentmike86 responds:
Thanks
awesome!
freakin' funny,bohemian rhapsody!!~!!!!,candy!!!!!!!!,
2 words:TOO AWESOME!!!!!!!
silentmike86 responds:
Thank you
Candy
Candy = 10's on everything. AWSOME!
silentmike86 responds:
thanks, you're too kind