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Reviews for "Gravestones: Trailor"

it might do well with a bit more effort.

some scenes could do with a bit more detail.like around the graves and clocktower. the ghosts are a bit childish looking but could probably easily improve.i can see possibilities in it.

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nice music

Hmm

Well you did better than anything I've done so far XD

It doesn't look half bad at all. I must say though, that it was a tad bit boring to watch. Spice it up a bit by adding sound effects. The animation can be worked on a little bit, and the storyline, I'm hoping, will be more interesting and have a plot in the finished movie.

I'm a rookie too, and I don't know how to do half the stuff I just mentioned...but maybe you can :) If not then good luck trying and let's hope this is given a chance so you can get better advice from more experienced (and nicer) users.

Well

When have you went to a graveyard and seen 40 identical tome stones aligned perfactly both vertically and horizontically? Never.
Your animation is way two straight and it makes it look bad when not everything is put in the same dimention, and any sort of detail you add in just looks weird when everything is so even.
As for a trailor, this isn't that good, since it explains nothing.
Also, your ghosts have to change. There black blobs that move around and somehow slober on the ground, they look so stupid and I can't see this going anywhere with them being the way they are.

It's all right, but you spelt "Trailer" wrong.

Fix the title, it looks like a good flash.