finished?
Is that even finished? Seriously graves... then ghosts... wtf?
Graphics were poor --- No story line --- weak weak weak video
if you submit something it should at least look finished =/.
Reviews for "Gravestones: Trailor"
it might do well with a bit more effort.
some scenes could do with a bit more detail.like around the graves and clocktower. the ghosts are a bit childish looking but could probably easily improve.i can see possibilities in it.
Come now
Something that annoyed me: the clock never changed hours...ever. Now that lack of attention to something on which you focused for so long really irked me. Also, I tend to rate things poorly when they just cut off and jump to the start screen again. The animation is fine, but try not to put out trailers that don't really say anything. You presented no hint of a story, no characters, no action - all I have to go off of is there is a VERY organized cemetary and a clock tower that doesn't seem to have a working hour hand and a fast minute hand. Oh yeah, and ghosts in the tower. Trailers are meant to prepare people for the story ahead, and as a trailer - this fails
Well
When have you went to a graveyard and seen 40 identical tome stones aligned perfactly both vertically and horizontically? Never.
Your animation is way two straight and it makes it look bad when not everything is put in the same dimention, and any sort of detail you add in just looks weird when everything is so even.
As for a trailor, this isn't that good, since it explains nothing.
Also, your ghosts have to change. There black blobs that move around and somehow slober on the ground, they look so stupid and I can't see this going anywhere with them being the way they are.
i liked it.
kinda sad. make more