Wow that was really kind of you...
It was kind of you to honor your brother in this way, by showing everyone how he was, what type of personality he had. I can tell he treated you well as a big brother, I'm guessing through your flash that he was a very good person before his accident, and im sorry he had that accident...
bad things happen to the good people, but i also saw that your parents didn't treat you very well...i know this doesnt mean anything to you but it does to me when i say i'm sorry for the type of life you went through and i hope that you can raise a family where you don't make the same mistakes your parents made
all in all, your flash was very impressive and it draws people into your lives, which is a good thing and I would just like to say Good Luck on the rest of this series...
I'll be keeping an eye out for this, you deserve a 5, so thats what you got ^_^'