Reviews for Stop Crying - Part 1

[smolder1]

i feel bad for being critical

this is a beatiful flash and a perfect dedication to your brother's memory. and it makes me feel bad to say this but...there are a few flaws that just stand out. first the fathers voice seemed to change as there was a differance in quality, almost sounded like a differant person so be careful with that. next is the subtitles matching up with the monolouge...the subtitles lagged a bit behind on a part or two. now that that's out of the way i commend you with making such a creative and sentimental flash in for your brother. artisticly this is perfection, emotions are conveyed and expressed through almost every aspect. 5 outta 5

[tomthedespoiler]

Very touching indeed

i really enjoyed this flash, and it looks like the start of a very moving tribute to your brother. From what you say it sounds like you havent used flash that long, making this movie even more impressive. A big thumbs up from me! :)

[Thoams]

Good lord... 5/5

I'm sorry about all you've gone through, but I'm glad to see in you response that you're doing better now. I wish you the best of luck. But all that aside, this was a very well made Flash cartoon. The dialouge was well written, the voice acting was really good, and the graphics were very well done for your first Flash 'toon. I liked the bit about helping that fellow out by taking his money; it let me crack a smile and after the body of this piece I could use one! All in all, you did a fantastic job and I can see you have a lot of talent. I look forward to seeing more from you!

[sddsjfsldkjsdklgj]

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first of all don't listen to timbot, I feel ashamed for my fellow countryman and 13 year old.
Even if the animation wasn't the best, It really made ,me depressed ( a good thing lol )
So keep up the good work, I'll be looking out for it.

[DMerricko]

One word

DEEP. My condolences friend...