Not bad
But, ah... I really doubt God would grant such a boon to someone still suffering from the vagaries of pride and hubris. His task is his task, it wouldn't be his place to question such a judgement. He would get his reward when he deserved it, not by bitching. In that light the ending was a bit disappointing, a bit of a cop out. He should not have gained such enlightenment just by causing death.
Or something. (By the way, I am an Atheist, don't take this as religious rote).