Well...
The animation that was there didn't look too bad in my opinion, but it's just that there isn't very much of it. It's short and seems unfinished. I liked the atmosphere though, very sad. Just make it into a movie that has a proper start and ending.
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you misspelled a word in ure title.... "My frist flash"
Not bad at all
Would have easily gotten a better score if it was abit longer.
Not bad at all.
The graphics coulda been better, but they were alright; the animation was nice and smooth. The little action included was ok; as for the music...not much can be said, but again: it was ok.
I give this flash 5 in the portal and 5 in this review. It deserves to pass.