About as funny as a funeral.
There are so many ways to flame this animation, so many negative comments to come. But first the good, the animation graphically was nice, not amazing, but nice none the less. But. And that is a BIG but...
The script was plain godawful, to be even worth the time spent designing this thing you would need a script at LEAST capable of matching the goodness of RvB. Slapstick crappy humor isnt funny anymore, about 200 years ago when laurel and hardy were the cream of comedy perhaps, but a dramatic pause then someone getting shot with a cheesy sound effect between each "funny script" simply does cut it. Not only here on newgrounds but ANYWHERE.
It's a shame to be honest because with a decent script and the removal of that crappy sound effect this would have been a good flash, certainly worthy of a 1st place possibly more then that.
Perhaps next time you should experiment with observational humor somewhat or parody things from the game itself.