Not that great of a piece.
Has potential, but why would you submit it in this condition?
Get your timing fixed, get the blood more realistic, etc.
And fix the evil laugh...it was a little cheesy.
Oh, and I caught the "die fat ppl" message in the one scene. Don't know if you meant to put it there or not, but yeah...
Take more time to "clean up" your stuff before you submit and your scores will go up.
Where's the plot?
Usually, most killers have a reason for their killing.
It seems your kid just wants to pull magic tricks and see the color red.
Surely he has more reason then that...
Not impressed
I honestly hope this gets blammed. It was an attempt at a serious flash done by a 12 year old, it wasn't even an attempt really, it was just for the sake of doing a serious flash. It had no meaning, it told no story, it wasn't violent. You jacked the style from various serious artists... Endless amounts of blood doesn't make something deep and creepy, nor is it shocking. The graphics were poor, and the movements were badly tweened. Usually graphics arn't a big deal to me, but when the story blows, and the production value is cheap, it's all you have left. I hope you learned something today.
Wasnt trying to be serious.
THanks for the review!
eh
its was alright that fat pocket poster was funny though
Errrrm....
that's...disturbing.