Quite Sweet
I liked your work on this one. I might be thinking about it a bit much, but one thing that I thinkt hat would have made it a bit cooler, would be if you were to take his eye color out. 3 colors would be sweet: Black / White / Red. Although there really wasn't a plot to speak of, other than a kid killing people, (which is enough for me, lol) it was fun. Thanks, I look forward to more in this series!