Yay for squirrels!
Well done! Squirrel bonus points applied.
Negatives: The typoes were scary. The voice-overs were okay but need a bit more variety; they came across as flat.
Positives: The good writing and funny jokes. Also the art was original and the animation kept things interesting. Nice of you to include the scene selections at the end. It's obvious you put some work into this submission.
Good stuff overall.
I loved it
the plot was excalent definitly a ten for stile and plot. the graphics wrent perfect but not bad at all. enfact even the graphics were impresive. but the fact that the story was better than the grafics made it look a little bad. also there was a flaw in your story. it might have been his fate to get hit by a car, because of an argument about fate. seriously thou great job. and the ending really was unixpected.
sweet
weel that was ok but it draged on
many hahaha's but a couple of hm's
*much laughter* that was great! i'm gonna point out the things that bugged me though, i think this seemed like not quite the final version you know? funny and good, but still very rough around the edges. for one thing, the subtitle for the squirrel chewing was really funny, but having it for the rocket pack thing wasn't. and i could handle "OMGWTFBBQ", but it broke the "fourth wall" (or whatever)... part of the reason the flash was funny is keeping that kind of "real" feel, so that when crazy stupid things like trucks falling from the sky and a vicious squirrel with a rocket pack happen, it's really funny. so the "liek omg" or whatever, was not funny and kind of annoying cuz it broke that feel of the flash. also, the guy laughing ( " *insane laughter* " ) as if he'd gone mad and such, was not funny at all... just, too unoriginal and kind of unnecessary. but it didnt ruin it. but yeah, those are my opinions The End. keep up the good work!
Yeah I get what you're saying - guess I broke off from my realism thing a little to much. Oppinion noted. :)
What a neat flash!
I though this was a witty flash. Damn yooouuuuuuuuu! Damn youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!