Very nice,
Only thing I could say is too much lighting, could'a used some rain or something,... otherwise very nice job... just what a Dad is ment for.....
Reviews for "Father"
nice
short and sweet
Very well done
The begining makes you think it's one of those psyco killers, but in the end it turns out that it's not. The sound effects are great, although I do think the thunder is a bit too repetative (a bit longer delay between them like .5-1 seconds) other than that it is definately different
Ok hear it comes
The graphics style is ok but be consequent in what you create, shadows and stuff.
Use Sounds in away that they never irretating except when you need them to be.
The lightning sound in this movie was way to much.
It influenced the tension in a negative way.
Instead try using spooky wind sounds and occasionally lightning sound this would increase the tension dramaticly. What about the boy why not give the sound of a boy that is scared once or twice. You're on a good track keep on trying and the atmosphere will improve from 6 to a 8/9
Hope this review is a constructive one.
Clever
I think the author did a really good job setting up an ominous mood with the stark graphics and the somber music. I really thought something bad was going to go down - it would have been par for the course to have extreme violence since this IS Newgrounds. But the twist ending was surprisingly effective. If the artist could render his drawings so they're really tight, I think this would be higher on the Daily Top 5