Empathy, and a Light at the End of a Tunnel
Cal you are the most emotionally talented music writer I have ever seen. I can tell you must've been in tears, on the inside anyway- or externally- or both, when you were writing this. I have also been broken by someone. She was...so... so beutiful- it nearly killed me just to talk to her. But, when I confessed to her, her face darkened, she turned me down, adn went out with my best friend- who isn't really my best friend but, he looks like he's been on drugs or somthing, because he's as pale as a ghost, and slouches over with his mouth open all the time, and... it wasn't the same after she broke up with him one week later. I still don't get it, what's wrong with a tall guy with a few flaws? I liked this song and your story touched me so much that, i joined newgrounds just to post this. I don't know the specifics but the way you wrote, "I force myself to hate her for what she's done to get over it all..." it seems to me she cheated on you. maybe i'm wrong, but you've shown with this music, that you might be a decent guy. I give you my blessing and hope that you find someone who wants to stick to you like glue, and one that wants to settle down. I've moved on from mine and asked out a different girl... who rejeted me as well, but... she's different. there was no drama in our little...chat. It broke off. that was it. most people still don't know about it. anyway, i've made this post long enough. keep writing, and keep your eye on the end of the tunnel. It's the light out of the darkness, through whcich, guides you to new beginnings.