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Reviews for "Mobster"

The Mafia

I think that would be like what it was in the good ol' days, as the Don would say. Nice movie. I would have yelled at you had the Mafia lost. Interesting style of animation, make more gore in a sequel (as I hopefully hope you'll make) and I'll show it to the boys down at Frank's...they'll love anything with gore and the Mafia mixed into it.

i guess it was alright

are you saying if you have a moustache youre a mobster? jk.

cool

good mob-style animation.

Very Nice But...

See I don't offen comment on something unless I think I have a really worthwhile comment. Now this film has alot of potential, You have the right style and lots of great ideas, Though this movie (although short) has plotholes already, The beggining I really liked, The Pulp Fiction theme was perfect, Ever since they met with the Boss everything started to go pearshape, Firstly I think your characters shouldnt all use the same models, Secondly you seem to be swapping decades through your story, You Arcitecture Resembles a Modern Age, But Your characters and cars depict 40s/50s, The Hand Grenade at the end was a very crappy ending to a cool short, A 50s cop wouldn't have one, Also the stealthyness of the Mobsters when disposing of the cops was not at all mobster like. You Have alot of Potential, And I encourage you to contact me, I would love to work together and do something with you.

Great Work,
-ShooBocks-

wasted potential here

a few problems:
pacing - there was too much dead time between things actually happening
music - too much looping of the same 15 second tracks over and over
the eyes - ever notice eyes don't turn red when people actually die?