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for school project this should do fine but if u want to get every last detail down then i would suggest watching the mouths of your characters and getting a better mic neways other than that i just kinda tuned it out but from wut i didn't goodwork.
not bad
it was quite an interesting animation you made here, i liked it and i sure hope you instructor likes it too.
ok
Whats with the bouncing people!? thats really annoying! .. i think if you open the flash with the Mortal Kombat theme..that would be cool.. other than that it was very informative.
They...
All had to pee really badly.
Nice, but needs work
You've got great talent, and the animation was nice. But there are a few minor problems with this one.
Firstly, you need MORE animation, you just had this guy bopping up and down while talking. You need other stuff besides him.
Secondly, the peoples mouths are the most obvious. You need to time the audio and make it look like he's acctually saying it. Its not hard.
Thirdly, The sound levels, you must make the sound levels around the same level or people (like me) will turn their speakers up to hear the voices and then be blasted out by the massive sounds of the sound effects you had in there. Its just too hard to watch then.
Other than that, nice idea and good drawings :)