Very good.
The sound quality was poor in some place. The art was good, and will improve with time. The subject was new, and the mix of fact and humor was excellent. Please make one about my favorite, Emeror Meiji, of Japan.
Reviews for "BTE: Zhu Yuanzhang"
if all that's true, i'll be damned...
the inflation got up to 7,000%!?! craaaap! haha. well, i think that you'll get an excellent mark in history for this, as it looks great from my point of view, and im judging it on entertainment, not whether it would be good for school! haha.
all of the dialogue was great, except the quality of the voice acting could have been a little better.
but overall, fascinating stuff, nice work.
7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
I have to ask...
What's with the constant bouncing of the people? And why do you have the mouths moving constantly as well? It would be better if you tried to make the mouth movements and vocalization correspond...but it was all right overall.
Hhhmmm...
I'm sure you'll get a good grade from your history teacher, you did put some effort into it; maybe more than most of your classmates, BUT... The animation leaves much to be desired in the sense that the mouths are moving all the time, a looping mouth doesn't quite cut it here. The bobbing up & down of the bodies: why? Are they at sea? Are they on a pogo stick? I'll have to admit though, that I actually laughed out loud when the army attacked, that was good. The art was reasonably well drawn too. The audio needs work, it was a bit low & there was a lot of popping (too close to the mic); next time try using a windscreen on your mic, or turn you levels up a bit & turn your mic sideways (trust me) and talk across the mic, this will help to eliminate that popping; it will also allow you to get much closer to the mic, a usefull effect sometimes. Overall I have to give you credit for this, and I hope you get a high score for this from your teacher. Good luck!
Nicely Done
I think you will do well with this project but there are a few things you could tweak.
The mouths are constantly moving, perhaps put in some extra time and do the mouths properly, not just a loop, or make the loop stop when there is no dialogue.
Why are they um...whats the word...*sigh* omg im retarded...going up and down? bobbing i guess. Is it supposed to make him look asian like off Shanghai Knights? (Bob your head, your indian royalty now, lol)
The facts sound good, I did a unit similar to this and we did Ming dynasty for a bit too, didn't notice any glaring ommisions or mistakes :) I also loved the battle...lol
Overall a good job but COULD use a bit of a tweak if you are going for a really good presentation mark :)
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