the poor english makes it that much funnier
haha i really liked this one. but mostly because the poor english added to the humor, in my opinion. i like the concept, can't wait to see more of these shorts! it would be nice to add voices to the animation, but only if it is good quality voicing. keep up the good work!
2.46?
why such a low score, this is great!! great animation, very smooth, freat GREAT fucking graphics, and aswome music, what the hell?!?!?!
if you put voice acting in, and made it longer, this would be frontpage material!
This is NOT your first flash cartoon!
The animation was completely astounding for a first film! The sound was good, but you just need to voice-over it. It had bad grammar, but I'm not sure if it was on purpose or on accident. Very good job, just try to improve on the humor. 8/10!
Nice
I guess you aren't english, so you make some mistakes, right?
That's ok, we can't force everybody to know english, can we? ^^
The graphics on the movie is great, and I really like your style.
But I think that you should have voices in it. Without voices, It felt a little bit boring, so at least try it next time.
The movie was a little short, but I liked it. But then again, it would be ALOT better with voices.
Cool
the sounds remeind me of those classic disney/warnet bros cartoons, cartonney sounds, keep up the good work man :D