Um...
Well, its too bad, i actually liked it. But it DOES have MAJOR flaws. I can almost guarantee you that this flash will look about 2 times better if you:
1. Use proper grammar and spell correctly!
2. ADD MUSIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Trust me on this one, it'll work. Other than a few minor tweaks-as in most sprite flashes- it was great.
Nice but could use some work
I liked this flash, the story wasn't that bad and it didn't look nearly as bad as so many others... It could have really been improved with music between speech. Also, I would run all the dialogue through a spell checker, since I did see many glaring errors in there. Good work though, nothing fantastic, but good.
it was ok
i liked it but it was missing music other then that it was ok
...
not a great fan of sprites... but a 5 BECAUSE the file size was 666!
Ops
Next time.. try a bit of literacy
... need to spell a little more like you care.. um.. I dont like sprite movies but I vote fairly.. darnit
What the F*CK is literacy