Not bad
Not too bad.A couple mispellings but over all good.Nice story line.Another one of the good Sprites on NG
Not bad
Not too bad.A couple mispellings but over all good.Nice story line.Another one of the good Sprites on NG
Very good
a great mario storry!
i really liked the fighting too!
anyway i thought u did a great job overall and i hope you make another one
Nooo! Luigi!!
You killed Luigi!! How could you!! Anyways, freakin funny. A bit quiet though. A bit of music may have helped. Also the text disappeared to quickly sometimes. Keep the text up a bit longer and add some music and you'll have it. But great anyway.
luigi died haha
anyway dont make the text go so fast because retards do that then you cant read it all o and put some music in there too
Are you calling em a retard??
fast text? wtf are you talking about?!
dude i think you just read really slow, cuz i had no problem...and calling the maker a retard because of your retardation, that's being retarded, got a quote for ya, "hukd on fonix wirx fur mi" get it...
LOL! you rule dude!