Reviews for Hate Sequence

[Bosa]

Yes

Not bad, Not bad at all. You could have had some music in there though. And.. the story just goes too fast. Try to add more onto it like.. instead of saying, "Hey, we found your dad's killer. Come on down!" say um.., "Hey, there's a place down cooper street where this guy knows something about your father's killer." And try to add in why he killed the father. Get what I'm sayin'? I've only created about 5 flash movies and I don't intend on sumbitting them on newgrounds. But, I do write novels and books. If you need any help with creative storyline.. I'm the one to talk to.one more thing, check out my music and see if any of it would fit in your next movie.

Your friend, ßosa

fenix-00 responds:

I'm glad and you are right, i will e-mail you later, thankz a lot.

[KingNuthing1611]

makes ya think....

ehich most people dont do anymore. it was a great view on morals and revenge. i dont get it tho, did he end up killing him at the end?

[Darkhand31]

Um' Kay!

hmm.......hmmm.......yea........i get the point, just, seems so farfetched. very meaningful, but for some reason I just dont like it.

fenix-00 responds:

Thanks, that is enough i can't expect everybody to like it.

[FlashGrl88]

pretty good overall

the story does go a bit fat, but its good. the animation could use some work, but hey. its great for what its worth. Touch up the story a bit, and you could have yourself a pretty nice flash.

fenix-00 responds:

Thankz.

[sephirothsicase]

rubbish

the only good bit was the guy getting shot and that was rubbish too.
and whats with the black and white thing you could hardly see anything.