Interesting...
Ok. 10 for sound because I love Peace by Rudy from Flashkit. It's an amazing melody, a shame it is that short. I am using it for my next animation.
This will probably get blammed. Why? Because of the first 30 seconds or so. The whole birthday and such. Most people will close the window and blam it. and looks for the score that most did. Cut that from the movie. Or make it better.
After that awful part with the baby and the whole birthday thing, everything picks up. The graphics are nice, which shows you have talent. But the graphics at the beginning... it looks as if the first part was made by someone totally different.
Think about adding some sounds, voices!! Visit the Voice Acting club at the BBS. Its great, people there are really helpful.
That would be it, Good luck.