No way
Hey man that was immense. I loved the wierd place she was in and I loved the dark and gloomy graphics. The animation was so slick it was unbelivable. Anyone not giving a 5 should be hung drawn and quartered, for anyone who doesnt know what this is all you need to know is it's not pleasent. Anyway nice work and I can't wait for the next installment.
i cant wait...
a strange and intriguing world you've created here. i feel there's going be a good twist when this series wraps up. i really can't wait. i noticed the misplaced vehicles and strange constructions of buildings and bridges that look like they dont belong there. and the way melony looks at the viewer before she answers her cellphone. it seems that there has been a story that was already told and i cant wait to see the rest. KEEP DISHING IT OUT!
a complete work of art...
detail to detail this master peice consumes my brain with amazement! Jesus! you are good! congradulations on the cloring, the style, the set up...EVERYTHING!
i am strongly looking forward to your future works...
peace,
Allmighty Hans
THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!
oh my god this is the best animation i have ever seen on newgrounds i cant wait for the next episodes good job this is the best keep at it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Superior flash.
First off let me start off by saying congratulations. I really like how you made a solid serious flash. The graphics, were exeptional, they were really detailed, like a comic strip in a way. The sound was pretty mysterious since it played with the flash.
However I thought your story line foreshadowed, and gave a way the story line without much cover up.
DO NOT READ BELLOW OR IT WILL RUIN THE STORY IF YOU HAVENT FIGURED IT OUT.
Yea i know Melony had an accident, and she is in a weird coma/lost in her mind. Her husband in her cell phone was really talking to her from the hospital. And when she passed out, what had actually happened was that they cut her life support.
I know you tried real hard dude i'll give you that, but I though the story line was a lil easy to predict. Anyway good luck, with your flash it was good in all the other areas.
If you want to make your story better, I suggest that you add a little shadowing, and less give aways like the phone call, or dont put the end of the phone call in it kinda gave it away. All in all it was great Flash is hard, but you made it seem Easy. GOOD JOB YOU GET A 5 FROM ME