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Reviews for "[my minds' eye]"

Amazing

I love what you did with this. The sweeps and VOX were really good. Im guessing the drums were originally a loop? It kinda gets boring after a while with the same drum beat. (I don't know if it varied but if it did it was too subtle)

I like how u mixed in trance in with this. Try replacing the synths with a sitar and see what it sounds like. (Im curious to see)

If you want to change this up a bit for fun for a different project it would be really cool if you made this into a fast trance track. There is one song i know that is really good with this type of theme and maybe you will like it to. Pm me if you want to listen to it.

Really good! This will definitley be on the top 5 of the contest for sure. 5/5 10/10

*Btw its the Hindu religion not Hindi. Hindi is the language.

zomgkerrie responds:

whoops! my bad in "hindi"-meant to type hindu but the stupid i is right next to the u lol
yea, i was having trouble with the drums..i had never made anything like this before-if i had more time i would expand on it! my son has an ear infection and i have the flu so its been an interesting week! i was unable to figure out how to make a sitar melody from scratch- i couldn't find a suitable sitar sound on FL-although i'm JUST learning, and acidpro was no help either. maybe you know?! would love to hear that song you had in mind, i'll shoot you a pm!

Thanks so much for stopping by to take a listen adn for the review!!! <3 Kerrie

Zomg Turban Man

Give praise to the three breasted goddess. The combination of organic-ish Indian vibes and electronic bits in this trk is golden :) I downloaded this yesterday and listened to it on the way to school.

The first thing that came to mind after listening to this through was the game "Timesplitters". The game is about a group of people with high tech gadgets and laser guns from the future who go back into time to collect crystals for whatever cliche reason that I cannot remember. I can picture the characters entering a dilapidated Hindi Temple of some sort, getting to the underground sector and figthing off a Hindu cyborg demon (hence the electronic influences) for the prize.

What I enjoyed a lot about this number is how you meshed both sinister and serene emotions into one environment. The textures are superb and airy, love the usage of synths in here, and the subtle intracies that work around the Hindu chant vocal, which is very beautiful and indicative of a Hindu meditating scene itself. Love that evil sounding swell that comes in every eight bars. Well executed build into the second phase of the song, except I would personally prefer maybe a tabla hit crescendo instead of a trancey snare roll. That resonant rhythmic synth theme mirrors the sinister side of the track quite well too, great inclusion in this track :) The chanty vibe and gradual automation was sick.

Beats were right on the money too, the one beat that you start out with (cant remember the name of that type of rhythm) was catchy, and I love how you build upon those themes with the dynamic tabla rhythms. Cymbal samples were great too, they sound quite authentic for what they were, well placed in the back of the track without being too upfront.

The only criticism I can think of is include another Indian based melody (maybe a countermelody to the vocal theme in the third phase of the track) with pitch bend articulations, needs a nasally string sound in here like a Sitar, I think pairing the background pads with maybe some subtle tambura resonance would augment the Hindustani atmosphere. Could be longer as well IMO, but it packs a lot of curry-punch for the two and half minutes it was worth ;)

zomgkerrie responds:

wow!!! what a nice review!! thanks for the time it took you to type all of it! <3 i was kind of going for a "dark beauty" so i'm glad that it came through a little bit. the trouble i had with vocal clips is that a lot of them are singing and chants from the Koran, and it is offensive to their religion for that to be heard anywhere but a mosque. i was having trouble finding anything else that i was sure would not offend anybody. plus i'm cheap and i refuse to pay for samples lol.

i may revisit this track. i have found a way to insert a sitar sound from my keyboard into my music so i may haev to try it!

and interesting thought on the table roll instead of the trance snare roll! it just never crossed my mind!

i'm so glad you liked it and thanks so much for the amazing review!
and curry-punch ftw! lol
<3 Kerrie

hummm....

Great work on this track, it has a defnite India vibe too it. I could imagine an Indian kat would be shoulder dancing to this song. Awesome job!

zomgkerrie responds:

thanks so much for stopping by to listen and for the nice review! <3

Nice work.

This song is really good, and I enjoyed it a lot. I just didn't get that sounds that came every now and again that sounded like some sort of grunt or something (I don't really know any audio terms. I'm not into that technical stuff). It threw me off a bit.

zomgkerrie responds:

ahh...i know what you mean...to me, the sound was like an electronic didgeridoo, which sounded fun and seemed to fit with the instrumental makeup of indian songs..i'm sorry that it threw you off:< thanks so much for the listen and nice review! <3