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Reviews for "The Stare off"
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Hoooray! I'm appreciated!!!
A very good quicky, I enjoyed it.
It was actually very good despite some of the minor errors I noticed. It's pretty nice, but there are many things you can still improve upon. Your artwork is pretty good, but it didn't stay consistant. At different points during the flash it was choppier than at others and that really took away from the flash, you should always go for high detail at all points in a flash. But the concept was very original and I got a few laughs out of it, so I find that to be the strengths of your flash. Another thing I noticed was the very bad sound quality that was used in your flash. Near the beginning I couldn't hear anything and near the end I could faintly here some backround music, you should really make it more audible, that would help your score. Overall I did find the flash pretty funny and hope to see some more works from you in the future, keep up the good work and the hard effort and it'll pay off.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Finally a good review, sheesh. Also there was no sound for the start and there was no sound for the guy falling in. I didn't have internet connection when I finished it so I had to wait a week or two for it to be up again. When I finally got it back up I just decided screw it and didn't get any sound effects off the internet. That is the sound effects deal. But sheesh this is my first flash why do you all have to be so dang agressive man?
You can do better
I can see that you have potential. Just keep practicing with flash and set your frames per second to at least 24 if it isn't already.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
In my opinion, 24 is too hard. I'm thinking 22, but I can always try.
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Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Huh? But my cartoon made it.
teh gay
its teh gay u need to learn to tween k? eyebrows multi color wtf? fram by fram need work to..
reasons for shitty grade
grapics 0 it wasnt 3d
style itwas a ninjer witch is teh secks
souund 0 i didnt have my sound on
violence 0 stare...
inteacticeity 0 thwere was non
himor 0 stareing is no laughting matter
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
You're an idiot. I'm gonna keep drawing like this and you can't stop me. Go to school and learn how to spell you Bastard.