Cool
I'd say this is very good considering it was your first flash. Hope to see more.
Reviews for "The Stare off"
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I can telly our still learning. You'll get a hang of it eventually. Try sharpening up your animations a little. I've learned that using the radiant colors for a lot of things takes away the quality, so choose wisely when you use them. The swords didn't need it and it make it look low in quality. Also, a little bit goes a long way. Hent eh hair was flapping in the wind, don't be afraid to add a couple frames for it. 5 frames vs. 2 will easily make little things like that better.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Yeah I didn't think I did the hair thing very good. Wel thanks for being suportive.
NICE!!
Dude that was awesome. It was like all serious and then he just falls off. So funny
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
I...I...I... I don't know what to say. Thanks for getting the point of this cartoon. you have given me my first 10.
great job!
loved it! great and funny ending too! keep them coming!
Originality is an issue
Actually you admit it's not your first flash and if you look under previous submissions you have one of those already. However the style is something I can't seem to escape; Anime inspired! while the style is tired the hand drawn feel gives something extra. assuming that if you would have put in SFX in, it would be good. I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt, 4/5
My only advice is; Be more original in your style.
Gotzen-Dammerung responds:
Original like what? I've always drawn like this. Anyway I'm concerned mostly with storylines. P.S. I didn't animate "Avatar: Prologue" I just came up with the story. This is just my first animated by me and story by me flash. The other 3 flashes I've animated were crap and I didn't submit them.