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Reviews for "Unholy Ordinator"

I always thought god preferred Glowing armour.

The top half is great, the bottom half, especially the feet need some work i guess.

Xephio responds:

Haha yeah, probably because i got bored of this piece before i even started with the legs. Rendering really is a monotonous work

Overall, I really like the shape and design of the armor. The coloration of the piece adds a sense of darkness not already implied by the black armor. The positioning of the light source creating the gleam that is coming off of the armor is done well and is consistent through the individual pieces.

That being said, now comes the criticism. Due to the size of the limbs, the armor appears to be made either for small man with polio, or for a woman. If it WAS intended for a woman, I would have preferred to see a more stylized breastplate, and before you go there, I'm not attempting to fap to a chick in armor; it's just expected that armor be fitting for the wearer. Also, if I were to critique anything else about this piece, it would be the positioning of the legs. The way they are crossed over each other just looks... unnatural. Standing in that position in that armor would be very uncomfortable.

Apart from those criticisms, great piece, and I would love to see more stuff like this in the future.

Xephio responds:

Thanks for the critique! Just to make clear, it's not a woman (very sad, i know). I've always had problem with proportions when it comes to anatomy, so now I know what i should be practicing more on

When designing armor, it's important to keep in mind that the person wearing it has to be able to move. Here I'm looking at it, especially the shoulders and hips, and wondering if the person wearing this suit of armor would be able to fight in any way. Bending your arms forwards looks impossible.

The coloring, lighting and background, however, are all very nice.