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Reviews for "Taking over me"

hm...

Not bad...

Good: The music and the concept. The music set the scene well and on the whole, the concept and the little twist at the end was well made, a very downtroden movie. Nice.

BAD: Graphics, mostly. Animation was simplified with tweens... may i suggest tinkering with FBF? Also the backgrounds were very simplified with little shading on the whole, so i would suggest using reference pics when drawing those as well. Character art was simplified, so i would suggest brushing up on anatomy and clothing physics with a book and polykarbon's website.

On the whole, this was an OK movie, but it showed effort, and i appreciate that. It's graphical limitations don't limit what you want to portray. I hope you take what i've suggested into consideration Improving your graphics woulda made this much much better.
Good luck and good job. I hope you do well in the future.

it was alrite but

That was like at the end of kill bill one when your like on the edge of your seat to see what happens next but just ends... the style was great but i didnt really understand what u where getting at? the storyline?? things like what made him change and thing like that im in the blank about this one...

I loved how you did it..

Your idea is AWESOME and the style of the words between scenes is a great idea that isn't used very often, but I don't think your drawing talent was really well done. I'd like to see a longer, remade version of this with a lot of time and effort into the animation.

it was ok

needed more plot and I'm not so sure the song fit well with it, but good effort, none the less.

Awesome

That was awesome man.. very sad. But very good too.
Man you should make more stuff like this. I really like it. 5 for you.