kinda confusing
Was this too artistic for me? If i'm just an avg person, then i think it'll probably b too artistic for almost every1 else aswell. That's y NG needs real critics!! ahah
It's difficult to rate this, but I'll rate it anyway... based on all the stuff that I did manage to understand.
1st with Jack's
I thought the art was great, nice style etc... but I didn't understand what was going on. The girl goes to the lake, there's some guy hanging in a room, and at the end there's this repetitive scene where the wierd guy's head seems to fall lower and lower. I dunno, don't get it.
Then with SickDeathFiend's
I felt that there was no need for the child-rape scene. Things like that get banned from cinema, showing actual penetration for a rape scene. And as if that wasn't bad enough, it was to a young girl!!! There are more creative ways to show that scene without it being so graphic and inappropriate.
I actually got a tiny scare when the lil girl ghost appeared, so good job with that. This piece is probably the one with the most scare-factor out of the 3. Scary b/c of that hallway scene, and even more so that some1 out there might actually get turned on by the site of a naked lil girl. Get rid of it man!
Last but not least, Shawn's
I've been a fan of your work for a while now. When I just started becoming a regular to NG (1 yr ago) your piece on NG Jam #3 (Art Gallery) was the 1st great f-b-f flash I saw, so I admired your work.
I like things to have artistic meaning, but I felt that maybe your piece here didn't really fit the 'horror' genre, it wasn't horrific or scary. It could've been, but it wasn't.
I watched it twice b/c I read that long-ass review and your reply to it, and I understand why you did what you did. But still, I felt that you didn't need to repeat those scenes that much to get wot you were trying to get across (that they were bullied and therefore commited suicide) Was there more to ur piece? Perhaps, but I'm not that artistically clever to figure it out. Good job anyway, I liked your use of 3D.
Overall, I enjoyed it, I've been waiting for a good flash piece for the past week or so now, there's been a real drought of good flash work lately. I think Jack's stands out the most, it's the most memorable piece, although I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing. Jack's and Shawn's piece looked great but they were mayb a lil too artistic for a general (dumb) audience. Myself included. ahah