Meh....
Wasn't exactly the best, although I give you credit for effort I think you need to work on storyboarding or plot development. Things happened for no reason it seemed. Like the General scene... kinda random if you don't understand Starcraft, or the ending was rather abrupt and the movie overall didn't have good flow. I did however like the effort you put into the amoutn of different graphics and movement and I think you should continue to strive on that. A 3 is my judgement.