it was ok...
...but that was too damned short. you should have released the trilogy all at once. it made me want more and it was too goddamned short!!!
Reviews for "-outpost part one-"
not to bad
its ok im looking forward to part 2
Game?
It was cool but had WAY TOO little interactivity for a "game." Add more interactivity and choices and it will be ALOT better. As for the grammer and shit... lol, I don't see a problem with it at all! It shows the personality of the characters.
Good style
Kept me entertained for a while.. Good stuff..
CV..
Fun game, work on your spelling.
Definitely cool, lots of potential. Two suggestions:
1. Consider putting items to be found somewhere rational. For example, the plasma near the other ship somewhere, instead of appearing somewhere he just passed, or the fuel tank in a garage or shed instead of UNDER A BED IN A PRISON CELL. THAT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE.
2. No offense, but get a dictionary. "Prison" and "Chicken" are words most people get comfortable spelling in 2nd or 3rd grade. Wondering how a functional illiterate could have made the game distracts from the storyline. Please spell check.
Fun enough to finish, but needs serious development.
Waterflame responds:
:P its not realy my style to have any sense, but i try to stick with a storyline, alittle randomness must be added tho. and about the spelling, its one of the many thing i suck at :( i know...I SUCKSUCKAASWAWAW!...