damn...
the last guy wrote a damn essay....let me just sum it up for you....u dont have any skill in movie makin... move on to somethin else... go get a usefull job that doesnt have anything at all to do with imagination or movies....u might find something u like....
Burger King maybe?
If your resources are faulty, don't bother!
Now, not that I could do better myself, but if I tried to make a flash and it came out like that, I would not ever release it.
Yeah, your sound was bad, sure; but instead of warning us, you ought to have fixed the sound and THEN released it--
But your graphics were... really sub-par. Things that look like that don't get to stick around in newgrounds. I'm sorry, they just don't. The motion was slow and poorly coordinated (VERY poorly), and even though sometimes reusing certain things is a good idea, you brutalized it. It's wrong, man. It's just wrong.
You need to get more practice. Lots more practice. I don't want to give you any credit for style on this, though, because if this IS your style, you won't get anywhere. Think development. Just because you did crappy now doesn't mean you always will, so chin up. I gave you a 1 in style to tell you you need to GET one, not that you ain't gonna get one. Okay?
You DID have the necessary bare-bones interactivity components though! A loading screen AND a start button. That's good. You're on the right track.
Finally, in humor, it just wasn't funny. I think it could've had the potential to be funnier, but not by you, not yet. You'll understand someday if you don't give up.
For now though, get this crap out of here and get some practice, but keep flashin'! I wanna see something GOOD come out of you!
Good luck!
ok i understand wat ur saying, and i know u mean well, but u have really pissed me off. i try to make good flash, i realy do, but i guess i just dont possess the skill to do so like urself, oh wait... whats that.. u dont have any animations on NG, awww.
well it isnt as easy as u might think,
have a nice day :)
I found it most funny near the end!
In the game Resident Evil: Outbreak, you're supposed light the gasoline on fire and blow the zombies up! But in this, they went to the beer truck and I guess he were supposed to blow it up or something. Instead he drove off, drunk, leaving the guy who saved him to get eaten by the zombies! Good work, though you could've made the sound quality better and make it more faster cuz not a lot of people want to wait for the guy to walk all the way across the screen, THEY DON'T HAVE THAT KIND OF TIME, MAN!!! Anyway, good movie, funny! Great work!
thee
sound was horrible. please fix it