nice
I like the way you produced this, nice choice of music, good voice acting, well placed effects.
The only thing I can think of to improve would be the art. You've got the right idea but.. something just isnt right. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it was the over use of radial, also the faces need some work. the eyes are too high, etc.
I hope next time its a longer episode, if you're planning on making a solid series, you're not gonna want to have 30 eps. at like 30 seconds each.
Untill later..
-ZT