Reviews for "TTT": Episode 0 Complete

[ZT]

nice

I like the way you produced this, nice choice of music, good voice acting, well placed effects.

The only thing I can think of to improve would be the art. You've got the right idea but.. something just isnt right. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it was the over use of radial, also the faces need some work. the eyes are too high, etc.

I hope next time its a longer episode, if you're planning on making a solid series, you're not gonna want to have 30 eps. at like 30 seconds each.

Untill later..
-ZT

BMFMagnus responds:

Thanks for the review!

I did some research, and came to find out that this was supposed to be the beginning of Episode 1. It just took so long that Episode 0 was the result. The actual episode will be much longer, about 5+ minutes perhaps.

As for the art, you may be right about too many radials. I'm still a novice when it comes to getting the desired effect, so it'll take some time. As for the faces of characters, I may improve upon this a bit when Episode 1 goes into preproduction.

Again, thanks for the helpful review!

[LogFish]

An Intro sequence

You synced the action up with the music very well so great stuff there, including the dialouge and crap it was a good effort. But! This really isn't an episode but the start of a program - I was just thinking 'hey, this might be alright' and then bang it's finished, leaving me thinking 'wtf?' Your ideas are good, perhaps a bit of work on the graphics would do you good - not entirely sure if I can give any solid pointer in regards to this, except perhaps drawing more straight lines for the background rather than silly-putty castles.

BMFMagnus responds:

Your idea, now that I think of it, was the original concept for this story. This was to be the beginning of Episode 1, but since this project took so long I forgot about it and made this its own episode.

When I make Episode 1, I'll probably tack this onto the beginning of it and let it run as such.

Thanks for the review! As additional thanks I'll put you in the credits for Episode 1.

[sled-storm]

OoooooooKaay?

that was a bit weird!

[celtic-draconis]

What WAS that?

Prologue, maybe. Does it explain anything? Hell no. Here I was thinking "TTT" stood for "Twisted Toyfare Theatre", and was hoping for a good movie, or at least decent. What I got left me feeling confused, bewildered, and utterly embarassed that I took to the time to watch it. Better luck next time!

[Sloppytaco]

G to the A to the Y

the only reason i voted 10 for humor is because its so bad, its funny