To the guy under me. This was good also!
Guy Under me: Why Do You Put Caps For Every Word Like This? Also, just so you can review better from now on, you say that it has its weak points. You also say everything does. A true song that truly deserves a 10 HAS no weak points. This being the case, WHY did you give it a 10? Anyway, it is pretty good but I didnt know sound files with voices were allowed!
Good
I will give you that it is good but it ain't punk. It's more of this new millenium pretty boy shit. I like your music but don't label it what it is not.
4/5, 7/10
I don't like the singing, sorry .. I like the guitarplay.
Good...
Don't get me wrong, this song is great. It's well produced and well composed. The problem I really have is the fact that it sounds almost EXACTLY the same as the countless songs released by Blink 182 and similar bands. It's built very similarly aswell (only singing at some parts, switching between lighter and heavyer riffs, etc.). It almost sounds like you just tried to get as close to sounding like Blink 182 as possible. which makes sense because they are a good band (even if they arn't my style) but it's just too too similar.
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Your guitarist(s), bassist, and drummer are very good. Your lead singer and backup vocals have talent as well. You have all the makings of a potentially great band.
However, your lyrics are plain, cliché, and sort of whiny. Now, before you bristle and accuse me of not liking the style of music, think for a moment. If your band ever becomes popular, you might consider putting a bit more effort into your lyrics.
I think they follow a train of thought, but some lines conflict with the others or don`t make any sense at all. Sometimes its as if you`ve written a love song, other times a breakup song, and sometimes it dips lightly into the emo genre.
Now, you might think this a minor thing, really, but the core of a song apart from the instruments being played are the lyrics. That`s what allows listeners to identify with the song, and what in turn sells your album.
Right now they sound random and hurriedly thrown together, which throws off the quality of the music, which is good. Keep it up regardless, good luck to you and your band.