AH
I'm a fast reader and a lot of the text was way too fast, that needs to be sorted out straight away.. you definitely need to add sound and maybe animate slightly more like breathing or small movements..only slightly because the flash seemed pretty decent on its own. i look forward to the next episode
Hey!
This is not bad at all, but here's some advice:
- Add background music on each scene and sound effects
- Make the character's mouths move when they speak
- Slow down the messages on the storyline so most of us can read a little better
Still, the movie looks good, although very incomplete. Good Job!
ok...
ok so the animation was really really good. BUT the stroyline came straight out of terminator, with a little bit of adaptation. i have a feeling in my gut when you used the word "aware" in particular, it was because you had a serious inspirational moment when you watched the terminator movies.
however, add sound and make the bubbles stay up longer and it could still be really good, since this site isn't always about being totally innovative with the plot.
nice
all it needs is sound, and so u know i cant read that fast
this was good...
but it was greatly effected by one thing...
SOUND!!! you need it dude! you need sound effects, and music, and possibly some dialogue! without sound, this movie was effected so badly becuase of that.
But overall, the story line seems great, the graphics seem awesome aswell as the animation, and it has a good amount of violence. so i cant wait for the next ox6, but you really need sound!!
Overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP!)