Haha
Can't believe the other guy thought this was trance. I can't imagine this song in a rave club :P
You did really well in painting a picture in my mind, about the serenity of nature. Unfortunately, the distinction between each pattern displays much of an indifference of imagination between each scene. What i am saying is that it like every thing feels the same, not much fluctuation in moods, despite its variety of instruments and sounds.
Now on to your description, though it can feel a little bit ludicrous, it really helps this song thrive.
Oh, and i forgot to mention, amazing build up.
P.S Trance critic, HA!