Reviews for lll_Deception Part 3_lll

[AloneInTheDark]

allright

Not bad man. Iv seen some of your work now and i must say that you are getting better and better with flash. This piece borrows alot from Kill Bill, but still has it's own identity. Ur good with camera angles, cinematic situations and details. I dont think you are the best drawer, maybe u should buy a drawing tablet to improve on this? A little bit more annoying was the animation at some points though. The scrolling background, spinning rims, road lines and walking animation really need some more work. I know u are a fan of Luis and i see that u use some things he uses too. Like the unblurring effects and the already mentioned scrolling backgrounds. All in all i think ur an artist with good potential and im looking forward in seeing more stuff from you. Oh and tell Zidane i said hi, when u see him in France for me, ok?

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks a lot man, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for telling about me getting better at flash!
I didn't know I had the skills of a "cinema" guy, for the "camera angles and cinematic situations". It's nice to hear that! Yeah, I'm working on saving up to buy a graphic tablet, but hey, money is a tricky thing ! :)
Yeah! Of course I'm a fan of Luis's work, he's one of the best. And yeah, I try to be inspired by my fav. artist's works. And yeah, you did notice the "blurring" effect ;-)
Thanks a lot for all the encouraging things you say, it gives me "stenght" and determination to keep making flash, but I'm really lazy lol.
About Zidane ... that was total pwnage tonight. That guy is a god. And yeah, I'll tell him you said hi... If I ever see him one day :-/
Thanks for the motivating review!
Alex

[ZT]

6

uhm... I think you probably should've revised/fixed up the errors before you submitted this. Some of it was really choppy, mostly the tweened parts.

Anyways, It's a pretty cool concept (I haven't seen the movie either), and the backrounds showed alot of effort.

Maybe more/longer fight scenes would up the score a bit?

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks, glad you rather liked it.
Yeah, there are always some stuff to fix/revise/add on movies. Nothing is perfect, specially my stuff. Damn, you should really watch the movies, they are way better than my stuff! :-)
Yeah, I always try to put a lot of effort in the graphical side of my flashes, since I'm not an animation god. Even though I'm trying to acquire a new style of drawing, but I can't find the right thing...
And longer fight scenes would definetely make the score go up, but they are hard to make, and I'm one lazy man ... :-(
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[veilsideGX]

looks hot

nice music..and brown blood = cool :|

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks man, glad you liked it!
It's pretty comforting and nice to see that some people like my work, and that that work wasn't vain!
Yeah, I think I did a good choice with the music, but hey, I bet some people are going to complain about it sooner or later, music is like liking colors.
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[seanbateman]

ok

kill bill sux but the animation on this was ok.

alexsmolik responds:

I'm glad you rather liked the animation.
And I don't think KillBill sucks, it's a masterpiece, which leaded me to parodying it. Anyways, I think you should watch it again lol, but hye, opinions are like assholes: everyone has a different one.
Thanks for the review.
Alex

[Secret-Agent-Man]

Where'd the plot go?

This was part III of the Deception series, but what the heck is he doing? It just looks like he's running around killing people. The animation and drawings were okay, but it really didn't make any sense to me. My suggestion for Deception part IV is that some form of the original plot come back into fruitition. This was a decent movie, though. It was just kind of random.

alexsmolik responds:

Thanks man, glad you rather liked it.
You're right, my Deception series went random... I should really consider adding more of a story in the next one, maybe a flashback or something. I'll follow your advice, and when I have time, will do Deception Part IV.
Thanks for the review.
ALEX