Okay
Well the art was good and was the song but, the words were a little fast. As a tutorial the art and words should be nice and slow enough for the learner to catch and memories. The drawing was nice, but sometimes people need them to go line by line and this one did not. The first two were okay, but the rest was as if someone could glanse and automatically be an artist, though some can, it is rare. If you are ever to make another, I think that it would be best to slow it down and be more detailed and everything will be good.