meh
could have been better
meh
could have been better
HOLY SHIT
THAT WUZ AWESOME U SHOULD MAKE A SEQUAL
shoplifter091
Solid.
Incredibly well-done and artistic. The timing could be finessed, the graphics sharpened, the action streamlined . . . but hey, that's what experience is for, right? The point is, you've obviously got a grip on the basics, and even a surprising amount of either talent or training, considering this is your first flash. You've already got what no one can teach you--now you just have to learn what there is to learn. Good luck. :)
your first aye?
Well seeings how this is your first ima be less critical with this than other people... I always like the use of quotes and they were very good ones. It was well paced, the backround musing was top notch and aside from the need of more visual detail i think youll do pretty well. =)
.......................... ok?
This wasn't too good, but since it was his first, I'll be easy. I thought it was too slow and kinda boring. Hopefully, he'll do better on the future ones.