Reviews for Love Outside of Sirius A

[Qwertyuiopasd]

Truly does encapsulate your music.

I like your bass work, It's an interesting combination of ambient stuff with the plucky thing, and the slayer, which you use very effectively.

One suggestion I have though is definitely look into different soundfonts. I'm not sure how many you use, but the voices sound like mostly things that come with FL. Which is fine, but especially for drums, you want to move away from the FPC.

The outro leaves much to be desired, but I'm really picky about outros, and they aren't easy.

5/5
~Qwerty

[Swerve]

Good.

You've done a great job on this song.. With that said, lets go to the improvement section: I don't think the bassline fits in very well.. That might be just my opinion, but still, it doesn't sound in harmony with the rest to me.

The electric guitar is fantastic! Reverbed a bit too much I suppose, but still, good job on it!:) The drumming part is also good, and fits in with the song good. You could have included a bit more variation, but it sounds ok like this.

I hope you continue this style, and I will definetely check back on your music!

-RES

MrPulsar responds:

Thanks a bunch for the kind words. :)

I'm definitely learning, I have no real background with music, I played Saxophone for a couple years, but never felt like I was really feeling it.

As for the critique, afraid that I am going to have to disagree on the bass line, I personally love it. When I first rendered it, to me it just felt perfect. The reverb also I will defend, as the song was trying to resonate out of deep space. I think I captured the image very well. But then again, I really don't know too much about music. I guess the more I do it, the more I will learn.

[PRDLaxkid4]

neow

this does not belong in techno

MrPulsar responds:

What are you talking about? It isn't in Techno, it's in General Rock. >______>