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Definitely a good little mix of tunes here. I got a nice open feel from the drums and piano, but I wasn't sold on the bass until the guitar came in. Once the guitar accompanied the bass it just all came together. Downloading and enjoying more of your music.
neow
this does not belong in techno
What are you talking about? It isn't in Techno, it's in General Rock. >______>
Good.
You've done a great job on this song.. With that said, lets go to the improvement section: I don't think the bassline fits in very well.. That might be just my opinion, but still, it doesn't sound in harmony with the rest to me.
The electric guitar is fantastic! Reverbed a bit too much I suppose, but still, good job on it!:) The drumming part is also good, and fits in with the song good. You could have included a bit more variation, but it sounds ok like this.
I hope you continue this style, and I will definetely check back on your music!
-RES
Thanks a bunch for the kind words. :)
I'm definitely learning, I have no real background with music, I played Saxophone for a couple years, but never felt like I was really feeling it.
As for the critique, afraid that I am going to have to disagree on the bass line, I personally love it. When I first rendered it, to me it just felt perfect. The reverb also I will defend, as the song was trying to resonate out of deep space. I think I captured the image very well. But then again, I really don't know too much about music. I guess the more I do it, the more I will learn.