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Good job. One thing I notice that I don't like is how the rain sound effect plays along with the whole song. This is bad, it should fade out sooner. On thing that I would experiement with is when you have the first strong synth come in about half way through the song after the thunder, have the rain completely fade out! You can have the rain fade back in when she walks into the house at the end. I feel that this would give the song more meaning and leave the listener more touched and clear on a story you might be trying to tell through this song. Keep up the good work.