Good, but watch your shading
The good - good form, nicely done clothing, anatomy looks mostly correct
The bad - watch your shading. I'm thinking you use a tortillian or a blending paper stump, maybe even your finger or a paper towel. Never use your finger - the natural oils in our hands cause paper to yellow and become somewhat discolored. In some parts the smoother shading works, and in some parts it looks muddy. The name of the game is pencil control. Once you can do value without any tools other than pencils (provided you're drawing), then you've got your media control down pat. The right eye (from our viewpoint) does look awkward, but the rest of the face looks okay.