Am i supposed to be able to read that?
it looks like you put a lot of hard work into that, so I voted five, but seriously, dude, get some fucking bigger fonts, or even better, voice act the lines! I would always be open to voice act one of the characters lines if you want my MSN is shmooshovel182@aol.com
and seriously dude, you need to do sometihng to make that shit readable. :P