hmmm...
That's pretty cool for5 only being a comic. well I see you've improved alot over the first couple comics. I enjoyed this one, it was really good. except the speech bubbles were kind of small, that shouldn't be to hard to fix. anyways keep up the good work.
hmmm...
does this mean i gotta zoom in on every speeche bubble to see what's going on?
What was that?
Dragon Ball Z is based off a comic that the Japanse already made. Your artwork isn't too good and there is no way to tell what they are saying. Try remaking it and using flash to make the characters and speach bubbles move on some of the pages.
could have been better
i would have voted higher if i could actually understand the font without zooming in.
Has Potential...
You could do better, just make to font bigger, or voice act the lines...as PumpkinBreadMuffin already said...